07 November 2010

A Forgiving..!

Hi friends this is something that i dedicate to all my friends i have ever known...it relates to everything that you guys would have felt...will have felt and probably will feel now.:)
it might relate to people in your life and how they are..well its your perception..:)



The stars lie beneath my eyes,
light gazing from the skies,
i take my last breath,
as there is nothing left!

I never had the words to say,
today i plan to end this day,
but when theres a reason to hope,
why lose the ability to cope?

a prank, a play, a wish, a bone,
to a stretch too far unknown,
within the walls the echoes surround,
the random thoughts that root through the ground!

let it go...forget those deeds,
the past alone or the present's needs,
stand alone to join the fray,
and be the best to pave the way!

7 comments:

  1. the poem seems a mystery to me.. Words tell a different story altogether.. Well, all the best dear.. God Bless you..

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  2. beautiful :)

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  3. @sneh..its exactly how i wanted a person to see it..just as a mystery..life is mysterious..anything can happen at a point in our life..and each verse tells a different story..thanks sneh..:)
    @yashica..thank you sisie..:)

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  4. eh?..lol..jason i see u dont understand..its like i said to sneh..every vere tells a different story and when you look at it that way only then you can relate to it..:)...

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  5. I absolutely love the last stanza..!!! :) keep it up...! :)

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